Bonjour à tous, je vous explique je suis en terminale bac pro et j'ai besoin d'un correcteur. Pour devoir la professeure nous as demander de faire comme une vdéo youtube et deprésenter un objet "must-have" en anglais. En gros on doit faire comme les youtubeur et présenter un objet indispensable à nos yeux. Il faut que l'on utilise de present be+ing et présent simple et qu'on utilise des adverbes de degré! J'ai donc décider de présenter mon téléphone (samsung s7) mais j'ai du mal avec les présents donc si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ça serait super sympa! Voici mon texte :
"Hi everybody, today I'll meet you for a new video!
I will introduce you the must have… is the samsung s7. It is a last generation phone, it's big enough but practical. It's very beautiful with its glass back! It is silver but also exists in pink, gold, black and white, it's terrific !
It's a phone that's very fast and does not bug.
this phone is touch it has a touch to return to the menu, to raise or lower the sound and lock it!
We can unlock the phone with our digital fingerprint, so it is very secure !
It has amazing photo quality whether with the front or rear camera.
It can worry us the weather which is very useful !
Its battery is long and it is sold with a quick charger.
It has a lot of memory that allows to have a lot of games, photos, and videos.
He has a lot of sound to listen to music or videos.
This phone is really amazing, he is very popular, it's my must-have because I use it every day and I can not leave it, it serves me for a lot of things.
I advise you, it is very solid and there is a lot of hull or case to protect it.
Its price is 600 dollars but i have a promo code of 10 percent if you want to buy it on internet that will appear there! Otherwise it can be found in any store that sells phone for example fnac, crossroads etc ..
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Go kisses to all !!"
"Hi everybody, today I'll meet you for a new video!
I will introduce you the must have… is the samsung s7. It is a last generation phone, it's big enough but practical. It's very beautiful with its glass back! It is silver but also exists in pink, gold, black and white, it's terrific !
It's a phone that's very fast and does not bug.
this phone is touch it has a touch to return to the menu, to raise or lower the sound and lock it!
We can unlock the phone with our digital fingerprint, so it is very secure !
It has amazing photo quality whether with the front or rear camera.
It can worry us the weather which is very useful !
Its battery is long and it is sold with a quick charger.
It has a lot of memory that allows to have a lot of games, photos, and videos.
He has a lot of sound to listen to music or videos.
This phone is really amazing, he is very popular, it's my must-have because I use it every day and I can not leave it, it serves me for a lot of things.
I advise you, it is very solid and there is a lot of hull or case to protect it.
Its price is 600 dollars but i have a promo code of 10 percent if you want to buy it on internet that will appear there! Otherwise it can be found in any store that sells phone for example fnac, crossroads etc ..
This video comes to an end, do not forget to subscribe, to love and to share if the video has pleased you.
Go kisses to all !!"