Correction d’un paragraphe en anglais - Description d’une photo

Bonsoir pourriez-vous me corriger mon texte (les erreurs de conjugaison et de syntaxe) 😀

The document that we are going to talk is a picture take by me. The scene takes place in front a building. In the foreground we can see a parking with many cars and it is the problem here. The presence of these cars can be dangerous, people can get run over by a car. And it is really not eco-friendly. The cars emit carbon dioxide who caused the global warming.
I propose to move this car parking and to replace it by a little park with fresh grass, trees and a little lake. I suggest to put grass on the building it is eco-friendly and beautiful. Let a little park it is great because childrens of the building can play close of theirs home. On the wall of this building i propose to put trapdoors for the selective sorting. When the summer comes inhabitants can picnic on the grass. And they can grow vegetables.

Merci d'avance

Mon anglais n'est pas génial mais je pense que ce sera mieux comme ça :

The document that we are going to talk about is a picture that I took. The scene takes place in front a building. In the foreground we can see a parking with many cars and that's the problem here. The presence of these cars can be dangerous, people can get run over by a car. And it is really not eco-friendly. The cars emit carbon dioxide which caused the global warming.
I propose to move this car parking and to replace it by a little park with fresh grass, trees and a little lake. I suggest to put grass on the building it is eco-friendly and beautiful. Let a little park it is great because childrens of the building can play close of theirs home. On the wall of this building i propose to put trapdoors for the selective sorting. When the summer comes inhabitants can picnic on the grass. And they can grow vegetables.

Je pense qu'il reste cependant de nombreuses fautes, je te conseille quand même de le faire corriger par quelqu'un d'autre 🙂

Merci beaucoup mais tu n'as changé que la première phrase?

The document we are talking about is a picture taken by me. The scene takes place in front of a building. In the foreground we can see a parking with many cars and it is the problem here. The presence of these cars can be dangerous, indeed, people can get run over by a car. And it is really not eco-friendly. The cars emit carbon dioxide which causes a global warming.
I suggest that we move/suggest moving this car park and to replace it by a little park with fresh grass, trees and a small lake. I also suggest that we put/I suggest putting grass on the building, which is eco-friendly and beautiful. To put (?) a small park is great because children who are living in the building can play close to their home. On the building wall I propose to put trapdoors intended for selective sorting. When the summer comes inhabitants can picnic on the grass. And they can grow vegetables.

C'est pas parfait je pense mais c'est déjà mieux 😉