Correction d’un texte en anglais sur l’opium

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Bescherelle · L'essentielBac français 2027Fiches bac françaisBrevet 2027
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Bonsoir,
Si quelqu'un aurait la bonté de vérifier le texte suivant, se serait avec grand plaisir. 🙂
J'ai essayer d'en faire la traduction mais je ne suis pas certaine que cela soit correct.
Je vous remercie par avance. 🙂

It exists a link between this document about opium and the main subject of this project, the tea.
First of all it is necessary to know that the opium is made from the poppy. Although its narcotic properties are known, the opium is above all used in medicinal purposes. Turks and Arabs having imported the poppy by the silk route, the opium, made from the poppy, is known in China since the period of emperors Tang (VIIe-Xe century). This drug is pulled by the capsules of the poppy, where lies the juice of the plant, contains some morphine and the narcotine enter other. Her consumers become totally dependent and ruin themselves to get itself it.
The opium is very desired, in particular during the Ogaden War ( 1839-1842 ) which sets the United Kingdom against the Empire Qing of China. While the British detain the monopoly of the trade of the drug, the Chinese forbid the use of this one, what starts this Ogaden War. The purpose is to impose in China the legalization of the traffic of the opium which is a big consumer market. This drug is produced in another part of colonial world, India. The extension of the trade with China expresses himself by the extension of the trade of the opium.
Je mets en italique ce qui me semble peu judicieux et en bleu mes propositions. Sans prétendre qu'elles sont excellentes…

It exists(There is) a link between this document about opium and the main subject of this project, the tea(je crois que la virgule ne convient pas ici; non plus que l'article. Si j'ai bien compris qu'il s'agit d'une étude portant sur le thé, il me semble qu'il vaudrait mieux écrirethe main subject of our study which focuses on tea.
First of all it is necessary to know that the opium is made from the poppy (opium is coming from poppies -in fact opium poppies). Although its narcotic properties are known (..its narcotic properties have been known for many years),the opium is above all used in medicinal purposes(for medical purposes). Turks and Arabs having imported the poppy by the silk route// the opium, made from the poppy, is known (present perfect : has been known) in China since the period of emperors Tang (the Tang dynasty) (VIIe-Xe century)(Ce n'est pas tout à fait juste ; l'opium serait connu bien avant la route de la soie, et mentionné par les écrivains de l'antiquité) This drug is pulled by the capsules of the poppy where lies the juice of the plant,, (je ne suis pas spécialiste en la matière, mais j'ai trouvé plus simple et je propose :… is collected from the resin released from lacerated immature opium poppy seed pods). contains some morphine and the narcotine enter other. (it contains morphine, codeine, and other alkaloids). Consumers become totally dependent (or addicted) and ruin themselves to get itself it.(je ne comprends pas)

Je n'ai pas le temps d'examiner les considérations historiques de la suite. Il y a encore pas mal de fautes.
Quelqu'un prendra sûrement le relais.
Merci beaucoup de votre aide ! Vos remarques m'ont bien aidée et je vous en remercie. Passez une bonne soirée.