Anglais - Expression écrite sur les événements marquants des années 2000

Bonjour,
Je suis en premiere et réalise en ce moment une expression écrite portant sur les évènement marquant des années 2000.
Je me permet de vous demandez un coup de main dans ma correction étant donné mes difficultées de syntaxe et de grammaire .
Je vous remercie par avance.
Cordialement
Lola



The most important evenment during the 2000s is the 11 september 2001. It's four suicide bombing having been the same day in USA by member of Al-Qaida and aiming symbolic building. This event caused the dieth of 2 977 peoples. Two planes are projected in twice tour of World Trade Center in Manhattan, a third in the US defense department. 2 hours later, the twice tour measuring 400 meter high and have caused the breakdown of 2 other building. This evenments destroy the USA who assisted powerless at this horror. The last plane crashed in campaign. In 2001, the president in USA was Georges.W Bush . Few years later USA declareated the war to Irak and Afghanistan.


Michael Jackson was born in 1958, he was an American singer, dancer and actor he began the music with his brothers in a group called « The Jackson five ». Michael knew by his cosmetic surgery and his famous dancing steps : « The moonwalk ». In June 2009, the famous singer Michael Jackson died about an intoxication after have done a hearth attack. The die of the king of pop was terrible for many fan . His die had the same effect as the elvis's or John Lennon's died. His funeral was diffused on TV in all the world and one billion peoples saw that.


In June 2003 happened the greatest heat wave know the france. During the twelve first day of august 20 000 people principaly old people die. Our society really certain of her richess and her comfort has been facedto the reality, that mean the aging population but the poverty of the France too. This evenment was a revelation about our society and a lifestyle.
Today many precotion are take during hollydays and for very young and old poeple, water are distributed and many publication are put on TV or magazine.


Barack Obama was born in 1961, he is the 44th president of USA. Elected for the first time in 2008 he is the first black who bacame president in America.. He represents the democratic party.


The last evenment the most important which happened was this year, the 7 January 2015. This day two terrorist (kouachi's brothers) penatrated in charlie hebdo's rooms. This attack against the satiric newspaper caused the die of 11 peoples ( writer, corrector, economist…). The two terrorist are killed two days laters but the 8 of January acomplice of brothers killed a police officer and the following day killed 4 jews during a hostage taking in a supermarket.

Salut !

Voilà, j'ai apporté quelques corrections à ton essai, j'espère ne pas avoir oublié des choses, au pire quelqu'un pourra reprendre ma correction. En rouge, ce sont des corrections, en vert des rajouts pour le sens.

Euphé.

The most important event during the 2000's is the 9/11/2001. Four suicide bombs exploded the same day in the USA, it was claimed by terrorist organization Al-Qaida and aiming symbolic building.

This event caused the death of 2 977 people. Two planes strokethe two towers of the World Trade Center in Manhattan, and a third one hit the US defense department. 2 hours later, both towers - measuring 400 meters high - caused the collapse of two other buildings. This majoreventaffected the USA, who assisted powerless to this horror. The last plane crashed in countryside. In 2001, the president of the USA was Georges.W Bush . Few years later, USA declared war to Irak and Afghanistan.

Michael Jackson was born in 1958, he was an American singer, dancer and actor. He began the music with his brothers in a group called « The Jackson five ». Michael was known for his cosmetic surgeries and his famous dancing steps : « The moonwalk ». In June 2009, the international singer Michael Jackson died having a hearth attack due to an overdose. The death of the King of pop was terrible for many fans. His death had the same effect as Elvis or John Lenon's one. His funerals was broadcasted on TV all the world, and one billion people watched it.

In June 2003 happened the greatest heat wave France have ever known. During the twelve first days of august, 20 000 people - mainly old people - died. Our society, knowing its wealth and comfort has faced realities including aging population and poverty issues. This event was revealing about our society and its lifestyle.
Today many precautions are taken during holidays. Old and yound people are warned, water is distributed and many campaings are broadcasted on TV or published in magazines.

Barack Obama was born in 1961, he is the 44th president of USA. Elected for the first time in 2008, he is the first african-american person who bacame president in America. He represents the democratic party.

The last most important event of the 2000'shappened this year, the 7 of January 2015. That day, two terrorists (kouachi's brothers) entered Charlie hebdo's building. This attack against the satiric newspaper caused the death of 11 persons (writers, corrector, economist…). The two terrorists were killed two days later. The 8 of January a complice of the brothers killed a police officer and 4 jews the following day during a hostage taking in a cosher supermarket.