Anglais - Correction d’une présentation

Bonjour,

je dois réaliser une courte présentation en anglais pour demain. N'étant pas sûr de ce que j'ai écrit jusqu'à présent, j'aimerais que quelqu'un puisse m'aider à corriger mes erreurs. Je vous remercie d'avance. Voici mon texte :

My name is… and I am a girl. I am 15 years old and I live in Romans-sur-Isère which is a little town placed in the South East of France. I live with my parents, my younger brother and my younger sister. They are 12 and 10 years old. I also have a big brother aged 18 years old and who currently lives in Paris to continue his studies. Paris being far from our city, we will be able to see him only during school vacation.
In my sparetime, I enjoy watching a lot of movies, I am indeed very interested in cinema. I like various film genres such as science fiction, tragedy, thriller with the exception of comedy. I appreciate auteur cinema as well. I also watch a lot Japanese mangas which are works just as interesting beyond prejudices. I enjoy reading books and these are espacially essays. I love spending time with my friends too. Most of the time, we enjoy eating out, going to the cinema together.

My name is… and I am a girl. I am 15 years old and I live in Romans-sur-Isère a little town in the South East of France. I am living there with my parents, my younger brother and my younger sister. They are 12 and 10 years old. I also have an elder brother,18 years, who is actually living in Paris to continue his studies. Paris being far from our city, we can see him only during school vacation (am.)/ holidays (angl.) In my sparetime, I enjoy watching a lot of movies, I am indeed very interested in cinema. I like various film genres such as science fiction, tragedy, thriller but no comedy. I appreciate auteur cinema as well. I also watch a lot of Japanese mangas which are very interesting without prejudice. ( qu'est-ce que tu veux dire avec "beyond prejudice" ?) I enjoy reading books and in particular essays. I love spending my time with friends too. Most of the time, we enjoy eating out, and going to the cinema together.

IL n'y avait vraiment pas grand' chose à corriger.

My name is… and I am a girl. I am 15 years old and I live in Romans-sur-Isère, a little town located in the Southeast of France. I live with my parents and my younger brother and sister. They are 12 and 10. I also have a big brother aged 18 who currently lives in Paris to continue his studies. Paris being far from our city, we will see him only during school vacation.
During my sparetime, I enjoy watching a lot of movies, I am very interested in cinema. I like various film genres such as science fiction, tragedy, thriller, but not comedy. I appreciate author cinema, as well. I also watch a lot Japanese mangas which are works just as interesting beyond prejudices. I enjoy reading books, especially essays. I love spending time with my friends too. Most of the time, we enjoy eating out in restaurants and going to the cinema together.