Bonjour j'ai mon dm est en anglais:
mon DM s'intitule : Writing in a diary
La consigne:
You have always wanted to start a sport (choose it!); you have started it at school with the Physical Education association.
You talk about it in your diary:
1) Write 4 different entries
2) Talk from the moment you started up to today.
3) Write a minimum of 120 words.
4) Skip lines.
je comprends pas les deux premiers points ni la consigne
mon brouillon:
voilà mon brouillon : Hello diary,
Today I've practiced a sport which I always wanted practiced of whom the dance. I started in 2010, I have practiced for 4 years and I practiced 1 hours a week
merci de votre aide!
Bon, normalement ce 'nest pas un forum d'anglais ici, mais je vais t'aider :
qu'est ce que tu ne comprends pas dans la consigne ? et pour les deux premiers points :
- "entries" = entrées de journal
- "the moment you started up" = le moment où tu as commencé (à pratiquer ce sport, en l'occurence)
Voilà ! 🙂
Le premier point je sais pas comment faire, en 4 différentes situations? un exemple me suffirait.
Merci de ton aide!
Non, ça veux dire que tu dois écrire quatre jours (je pense), du style
"Friday the 5th : Today was my first day at the gym. I admit, i was a little bit scared.. what will the other think about the newbie ? I hope it won't be too hard," etc…. puis
"Friday the 19th: so now it's been two weeks, and i'm beginning to feel integrated in the class. I have a new friend, and we work out together" etc etc.. tu comprends ? c'est pour montrer l'évolution
Ah d'accord merci! et pour le deuxième point je dois dire "et enfin je l'ai commencé aujourd'hui" etc..
en fait tu dois faire quatres jours différents, qui racontent depuis le jour où tu as commencé (première entrée) jusqu'à aujourd'hui (quatrième entrée)
Ah donc, le premier jour où j'ai pratiqué ce sport?
1er jour : à l'âge de 12 ans exemple
etc…
j'utilise quel temps?
voilà c'est ça ! mais utilise toujours du présent, vu que tu es censée l'écrire le jour même
Bonjour j'ai mon dm est en anglais:
mon DM s'intitule : Writing in a diary
La consigne:
You have always wanted to start a sport (choose it!); you have started it at school with the Physical Education association.
You talk about it in your diary:
1) Write 4 different entries
2) Talk from the moment you started up to today.
3) Write a minimum of 120 words.
4) Skip lines.
Voilà mon travail:
Hello Diary, (23/04/2013)
Friday the 5th,
Today it was my first day at my high school's dance club. I admit, i was a little bit
scared. I hope it won't be too hard but I'm dashing because I have always wished to do this
sport.
Friday the 12nd,
Hey, listen my diary, it's been a few days but I'm beginning to feel integrated in the
association. I have made new friends and a dance professor,he is so kind with me. I feel relieved
Friday the 20th,
My professor announces us a good news, he said to us that he organizes a dance show
which is entitled " dance with Esmeralda ". I have never felt so excited. I am finally
going to be able to dance and show my passion to my parents.
Friday the 29th,
Today was a great day. I will never forget this day and this dance show. My dear diary,
I've never felt so happy. I will become A dancer professional one day.
