Anglais - Aide pour la correction d’un devoir

voila j'ai rediger mon devoir d'anglais et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider a corriger mes faute svp.

Many people are brought in their life to leave their native lands. They are obliged to leave women and child. Deux raisons principales poussent les gens à l'immigration : des raisons politiques et des raisons économiques

Immigrants, which is especially those are poor and without qualifications. and they tend to leave in countries close as of theirs. Thus, the majority of the emigrants in the United States and Canada are originating in Central America and the Caribbean. In the countries of the European Union, they come primarily from the Maghreb, the Middle East and Eastern Europe. This proximity makes it possible to the immigrants to remain in liaison with their families remained with the country because the majority of the immigrants send money to their family remained with the country to overcome poverty. Very often the poverty and the lack of sometimes very little remunerated work push people to be joined of another country, to flee misery, the famine

economic reason are not only, L has there also the political reasons: : many immigrants leave their country to flee a dictatorial mode which prohibits any freedom. France, is the country which accomodates best these people, because she preaches the defense of the human rights She is a country of traditional asylum. . Moreover some flee of the political crises, such as wars. At the time of hardly of Algeria, many families one found refuge in France. It feels there a sense of security and peace.

The escape, is thus the word which characterizes the reasons which push a person has to leave her country.

Many people , one day , are bed to leave their native lands. They are obliged to leave women and children . There are two main reasons why people immigrate : Political reasons and Economic reasons

Immigrants, which are especially the ones that are poor and without qualifications. and they tend to leave to countries close from their ones . Thus, the majority of the immigrants in the United States and Canada are originating in Central America and the Caribbean. In the countries of the European Union, they come primarily from the Maghreb, the Middle East and Eastern Europe. This proximity makes it possible to the immigrants to stay in contact with their families that staid in the country because the majority of the immigrants send money to their family left in the country to overcome poverty. Very often the poverty and the lack of sometimes very little remunerated work push people to be joining another country, to flee misery, the famine

economic reasons are not the only ones , there are also the political reasons: : many immigrants leave their country to run away from a dictatorial mode which prohibits any freedom. France, is the country which accomodates these people the best , because it preaches the defense of the human rights . It is a country of traditional asylum. . Moreover some people run away from the political crisis, such as wars. On Algeria's mean times , a lot of families found refuge in France. It feels like there is a sense of security and peace.

The escape, is thus the word which characterizes the reasons which push a person has to leave her country.



Voila , je pense avoir corrigé ! Juste un petit conseil a l'avenir , prend garde aux sites de traductions 🙂

Many people are brought in their lives to leave their native lands. They have to leave women and children. Political and economic reasons generally make people immigrate.

Immigrants, who are usually poor and unskilled, tend to leave the countries close to their own one. Thus, the majority of immigrants living in the United States and Canada come from Central America and from the Caribbeans. About the European union, they generally come from Maghreb, from the Middle East, and from Eastern Europe. This proximity makes it possible for the immigrants to keep in touch with their families who stayed in their countries, because the majority of immigrants usually send money to their families in order to avoid poverty. Poverty and the lack of high-paid jobs often push people to go to another country in order to flee misery and famine.

Economic reasons are not the only ones which push people to immigrate, there are also political reasons. Many immigrants leave their countries to run away from a dictatorial policy, which prohibits any form of freedom. France is the country where people are more likely to go because it defends the human rights. It is a country of traditional *asylum* (what does it mean ?). Moreover, some people escape from political crisis, such as wars. For example, during the Algerian war, a lot of families found refuge in France. It feels like there is a sense of safety and peace.

Thus, this word, escape, is the word which, in my opinion, embodies the most the reasons which lead a person to leave his/her country.



Voilà. j'ai corrigé les fautes du premier qui a corrigé ton devoir. Je fais des études d'Anglais, donc je ne pense pas qu'il y ait d'énormes fautes… Du moins je l'espère. Bonne soirée.