Anglais - Questions sur une nouvelle de Katherine Mansfield

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Bonsoir à tous 🙂
Je travaille sur une nouvelle de Katherine Mansfield
"Something Childish But Very Natural" qui parle d'un jeune homme qui a le coup de foudre pour une jeune fille de 16 ans dans un train .
Pourriez-vous me dire silvouplaît si j'ai fait beaucoup de fautes ?
Merci

1)The scene set in a train during the night , under an apricot evening sky .

2) The reader learns that the name of the young man is Henry .
We can imagine that his work consists in designing drawings of building or publicity because he speaks about a portofolio and an office .

3a)Henry was looking at the books when he realized that he was late. In hurry he forgot his business at the station.

b)In fact he's so much under the charm of the young girl whom his heart is pounding .
He feels difficulties in trying to repress his emotions .

4) The girl's physical characteristics are concentrated in the third paragraph :
she "has grey eyes" , "eyesbrows like 2 gold feathers" , her "lips were faintly parted" and she has "a white throat" .
The shape of her face is wonderfully delicate and "all that burning hair" means that she's red-head.


5)Henry
Line 30 we can see that the woman is amused by the story of Henry : " And now she was really smiling . The smile danced in her eyes, crept over
her cheeks to her lips and stayed there ."
She's also sympathetic as she's feels sad for Henry

Sujet d'invention :

(Ici je voulais dire dès le moment où elle était partie)
Henry felt disabled just at the moment where she had disappeared.
How he had been able to let occur such a failure?
Perhaps did he just have dreaming this meeting with the girl of her dreams ?
"I come down from London every evening" , the sentence resounded in his head like an echo .
"Perhaps I frightened her too much and she lied to me ? But however she appeared so nice with me and did not wish to leave in a another compartment … "thought Henry while wanting to get out of his mind his fears .
Pauline78 a écrit :1)The scene is set in a train during the night , under an apricot (?) evening sky .

2) The reader learns that the name of the young man is Henry . (Or use an apostrophe in more familiar speech).We can imagine that his work consists in designing drawings of building or publicity because he speaks about a portofolio and an office .

3a)Henry was looking at the/some/sans article books when he realized that he was late. In a/the/his hurry he forgot his business at the station.

b)In fact he's so much under the charm of the young girl whom his heart is pounding .
He feels some difficulties in trying to repress his emotions .

4) The girl's physical characteristics are concentrated in the third paragraph :
she "has grey eyes" , "eyesbrows like 2 gold feathers" , her "lips were faintly parted" and she has "a white throat" .
The shape of her face is wonderfully delicate and "all that burning hair" means that she's red-head. (Rehead is one word. Strange to say the adjective red-headed has the hyphen!)


5)Henry
Line 30 we can see that the woman is amused by the story of Henry : " And now she was really smiling . The smile danced in her eyes, crept over
her cheeks to her lips and stayed there ."
She's also sympathetic as she's feels sad for Henry

Sujet d'invention :

(Ici je voulais dire dès le moment où elle était partie)
Henry felt disabled just at the moment where she had disappeared.
How he had been able to let occur such a failure?
Perhaps did he just have dreaming this meeting with the girl of her dreams ? (Bad style to use dreams twice in the same sentence). "I come down from London every evening" , the sentence resounded in his head like an echo .
"Perhaps I frightened her too much and she lied to me ? But however she appeared so nice with me and did not wish to leave in a another compartment … "thought Henry while wanting to get his fears out of his mind .
Good spelling and mainly good syntax. Well done!
Change the underlined words.
"Where" indicates a place. What adverb indicated time?
Merci beaucoup 🙂

The scene is set in a train under "an apricot evening sky" . (=en début de soirée ?)

Henry was looking at the book-stall when he realized that he was late. In the hurry he forgot his business at the station.

In fact he's so much under the charm of the young girl that his heart is pounding .
He feels some difficulties in trying to repress his emotions .

The shape of her face is wonderfully delicate and "all that burning hair" means that she's redhead.

she's also sympathetic as she feels sad for Henry

Henry felt helpless just at the moment when she had disappeared.
(Mince , disabled c'est dans le sens d'handicapé ?)

How had he been able to leave this failure last ?

Perhaps he had imagined this meeting with the girl of her dreams ?

But however she appeared so nice and did not wish to go in a other compartment



Dernière question
expression personelle

" Isn't life wonderful ? "

"Life Is Not Easy" , "life Is Not Fair" o even (du mal a trouvé le bon sens d'encore ici ) "What A Wonderful World" . Did the famous jazzman tell truth ?
To my mind life is not odious but progressive .
It is a question of objectives , choices and priorities .
It's what, I suppose differentiate us from an ordinary animal in addition to our conscience.
The evolution, the change, on a chronological scale whose arrow points towards the future, must be able to leave the past to its place.
It doesn't matter what I made , from where I come, nothing what will have marked my former life can predict the personn that I will be in one week, one year or a decade.
I still carry much hopes, and whatever my wounds, my "DIRES ?", my misfortunes desired by others, I think of being able to build my own happiness.
It's not a question of what one deserves compared to what one made (because in this case I think that there are enormously injustices)
I really don't believe in karma. No , it's just that tomorrow have nothing to do with yesterday. For me, to think like this , is to disavow the capability of evolution of the Man . (Est-ce que anglais ca marche comme en français ?
L'Homme avec un H majuscule ? )
I refuse to think that if at a point A i'm unhappy, at the point B I still will be it .
I try to focus myself on these small things which make my happiness : to gain the respect of people that I love , to receive a message of a friend , go to the cinema with them , to laugh often and much , to listen to rock'n'roll in my bedroom by mimant the instruments whereas I must be a bad musician , read a good book , to deserve the respect of intelligent people, to eat chocolates in front of the TV
Like the title of the Boris Vian's poem says , " Je voudrais pas crever " .
Pauline78 a écrit :1. The scene is set in a train under "an apricot evening sky" . (=en début de soirée ?)

2. The shape of her face is wonderfully delicate and "all that burning hair" means that she's redhead.

3. Henry felt helpless just at the moment when she had disappeared.
(Mince , disabled c'est dans le sens d'handicapé ?)

4. How had he been able to leave this failure last ?

5. But however she appeared so nice and did not wish to go into another compartment
1. Very poetic! I never dis see an apricot sky in England…
2. She's a redhead.
3 That's right! 🙂
4. Incomprehensible.
5. "nice" est très passe-partout! `Éviter, d'après moi (et mes professeurs il y a longtemps).
Sauf nice = net, juste.


Dernière question
expression personelle

" Isn't life wonderful ? "

"Life Is Not Easy" , "life Is Not Fair" or even (du mal a trouvé le bon sens d'encore ici ) "Oh! What A Wonderful World" . Did the famous jazzman tell the truth ?
To my mind life is not *odious but progressive .
It is a question of objectives , choices and priorities .
It's what,in addition to our conscience, I suppose differentiate us from an ordinary animal .
The evolution, the change, on a chronological scale whose arrow points towards the future, must be able to leave the past to its place.
It doesn't matter what I made or from where I come, nothing what will have marked my former life can predict the personn that I will be in one week, one year or a decade.
I still carry much hopes, and whatever my wounds, my words/sayings, my misfortunes desired by others, I think of being able to build my own happiness.
It's not so much a question of what one deserves as what one made (because in this case I think that there are enormously injustices)
I really don't believe in karma. No , it's just that tomorrow have nothing to do with yesterday. For me, to think like this , is to disavow/reject/repudiate the capability of evolution of the Man . L'Homme avec un H majuscule ? )
I refuse to think that if at a point A i'm unhappy, at the point B I still will be it .
I try to focus myself on these small things which make my happiness : to gain the respect of people that I love , to receive a message of a friend , 🙂to go to the cinema with them , to laugh **much and often, to listen to rock'n'roll in my bedroom by mimant the instruments whereas I must be a bad musician , to read a good book , to deserve the respect of intelligent people, to eat chocolates in front of the TV
Like the title of the Boris Vian's poem says , " Je voudrais pas crever " .
* Not incorrect, but a very strange juxtaposition!
** Linguistic studies will explain why this order….
L'expression est assez correcte et les idées pas mauvaises.
Cependant, je ne vois pas trop la logique
Isn't life wonderful=>
progressive, pas odieuse=>
évolution=>
espoirs=>
croyances=>
ce qui est la joie de vivre?
Ayant dépassé le nombre maxi de mots j'ai du supprimer des phrases :mad:
Je pense que je vais sacrifier la première phrase aussi car elle n'est pas vraiment digne d'intérêt je ne suis pas convaincue 😐

"Life is not easy" , "life is not Fair" or even "Oh! What A Wonderful World" .
Did the famous jazzman tell the truth ?
To my mind it is a question of objectives , choices and priorities .
The evolution, the change, on a chronological scale whose arrow points towards the future, must be able to leave the past in its place.
I still carry much hopes, and whatever my wounds, my sayings …
I think to be able to build my own happiness.
It doesn't matter what I made or from where I come, nothing that will have marked my former life can predict the individual that I will be in one week, one year or a decade. It's not so much a question of what one deserves as what one made .
I refuse to think that if at a point A i'm unhappy, at the point B I still will be .
In my opinion , to think the opposite is to repudiate the capability of evolution of the Man .
It's just that tomorrow have nothing to do with yesterday.
I try to focus myself on these small things which make my happiness : to gain the respect of people that I love , to receive a
message from a friend , to go to the cinema with , to laugh much and often, to listen to rock'n'roll , to read a good book ,
to deserve the respect of intelligent people, to eat chocolates in front of the TV
Like the title of the Boris Vian's poem says , " Je voudrais pas crever " .
Pauline78 a écrit :"Life is not easy" , "life is not Fair" or even "Oh! What A Wonderful World" .
Did the famous jazzman tell the truth ?
To my mind it is a question of objectives , choices and priorities .
The evolution, the change, on a chronological scale whose arrow points towards the future, must be able to leave the past in its place.
I still carry much hope (or many hopes)[/ki] , and whatever my wounds, my sayings … (not clear)
I think to be able to build my own happiness.
It doesn't matter what I am made or from where I come, nothing that will have marked my former life can predict the individual that I will be in one week, one year or a decade. It's not so much a question of what one deserves as what one made .
I refuse to think that if at a point A i'm unhappy, at the point B I still will be .
In my opinion , to think the opposite is to repudiate the capability of evolution of the Man . (Correct, but pompous).
It's just that tomorrow have nothing to do with yesterday.
I try to focus myself on these small things which make my happiness : to gain the respect of people that I love , to receive a
message from a friend , to go to the cinema with__ , to laugh much and often, to listen to rock'n'roll , to read a good book ,
to deserve the respect of intelligent people, to eat chocolates in front of the TV
Like the title of the Boris Vian's poem says , " Je voudrais pas crever " .

It's very poetical……
I think I will be able to build my own happiness.
It's just that tomorrow has nothing to do with yesterday.
to go to the cinema with us je n'ai pas compris , pourquoi on ne peut pas dire them ?
t's not so much a question of what one deserves compared to what it makes

It's very poetical……
Je vais mettre une note explicative pour Boris Vian parce que ma prof va peut être juste percevoir un côté vulgaire 😞



"under an apricot evening sky" , repris textuellement
Pauline78 a écrit :to go to the cinema with us je n'ai pas compris , pourquoi on ne peut pas dire them ?
recevoir une lettre d'un ami, aller au cinéma avec eux
ne fait pas de sens en français non plus.
t's not so much a question of what one deserves compared to what it makes
Incompréhensible!
d'accord ,merci beaucoup 🙂 🙂

"it's not so much a question of what one deserves compared to what it makes "
C'est tellement confus que je ne parviens pas à me souvenir du sens exact de ce que je voulais formuler oulala
Je vais reprendre 😮