Salut, je dois écrire en texte en anglais mais je ne suis pas sur complétement de mon texte si on pourriez me corriger pour vérifier les fautes svp, merci d'avance :
I was just leaving the Sciences Eco building when I heard a strange sound. Turning around I saw a ridiculous man! A large strange man walked in front of me. But why was he strange?
I can’t express my feelings with words, so I will describe this scene objectively.
I saw a man who carried all contrary. Indeed, his boxer short was above his jean and his tee-shirt was above his sweater. The colours were very provocative too. His sweater and his jean were black but his boxer short and his tee-shirt were yellow. Could you imagine his look? It was an incredible and spectacular scene and the funniest in this was that the man wasn’t shame. This was right! This man walked in Clermont-Ferrand after a raining day without to be shame. I thought that for him, there wasn’t limit in the style of clothing…
I had to say that he had a daring comportment! A lot of people were sceptical, surprised but also curious. Indeed, this style clothing was frightening but attractive too! But I had to admit that a lot of people laughed. I had so much shame for him that I walked far from him. The most important idea was that the man walked next to the road without embarrassment. At the same time, a car ran in a water puddle which soaked this man! This man was after very furious so he ran without stopping by looking on the sides continuously if another danger didn’t arrive. But the only danger was in front of him and at full speed he caught a post which struck him! Two minutes later, an ambulance arrived to be able to transport him to the hospital. This was the biggest adventure which finished badly. But not so badly! Who could think that this scene became popular!
In a few days, it was on the first page on the newspaper! The title of the article was: “Change of style, all contrary”
I could see on this article a photograph of this man with a description and criticisms under.
At the beginning, the journalist described this man in an objective way. However, at the end of the article, it gave his point of view which was as true and strange as.
The journalist wrote: “A revolution style of dress can be say at this moment? A radical change of style which remains provocative and original! “
It was true that this new style went contrary to the usual style. But, this adventure became popular because the word of mouth was very present at the bar or in the street for example.
After this, the radio and the television participated in broadcasting of this new idea of style!
So this man was at the origin of the launching of a new style. But he didn’t know that this new style became popular because he was during a few days in the hospital. Indeed, when I walked on the street to the Sciences Eco building, I crossed more and more people which carried the same clothes. I really thought at this moment of a beginning of a new fashion!
And I had not wrong! Three days later, the style had been adopted by many people in Clermont-Ferrand. And the first man who carried this new style was for them: “The creator of a new world!”
Thus, when the creator leaved the hospital, I came to meet him a second once but in front of the hospital a lot of people were here! I was very surprised! You couldn’t do an idea of this scene! A lot of people was carried same at this creator! I could see red, purple, pink boxer short or leggings! This was inconceivable but real! When the creator left the hospital, I heard a lot of cry and I could see the creator with his yellow and tee-shirt yellow boxer short. He felt like emotional of this welcome. He was very surprised to be at the origin of a dress style revolution, so he shouted:”After the tecktonik, here the vestitonik!”
Since his day, the vestitonik circulated in all France!
I was just leaving the Sciences Eco building when I heard a strange sound. Turning around I saw a ridiculous man! A large strange man walked in front of me. But why was he strange?
I can’t express my feelings with words, so I will describe this scene objectively.
I saw a man who carried all contrary. Indeed, his boxer short was above his jean and his tee-shirt was above his sweater. The colours were very provocative too. His sweater and his jean were black but his boxer short and his tee-shirt were yellow. Could you imagine his look? It was an incredible and spectacular scene and the funniest in this was that the man wasn’t shame. This was right! This man walked in Clermont-Ferrand after a raining day without to be shame. I thought that for him, there wasn’t limit in the style of clothing…
I had to say that he had a daring comportment! A lot of people were sceptical, surprised but also curious. Indeed, this style clothing was frightening but attractive too! But I had to admit that a lot of people laughed. I had so much shame for him that I walked far from him. The most important idea was that the man walked next to the road without embarrassment. At the same time, a car ran in a water puddle which soaked this man! This man was after very furious so he ran without stopping by looking on the sides continuously if another danger didn’t arrive. But the only danger was in front of him and at full speed he caught a post which struck him! Two minutes later, an ambulance arrived to be able to transport him to the hospital. This was the biggest adventure which finished badly. But not so badly! Who could think that this scene became popular!
In a few days, it was on the first page on the newspaper! The title of the article was: “Change of style, all contrary”
I could see on this article a photograph of this man with a description and criticisms under.
At the beginning, the journalist described this man in an objective way. However, at the end of the article, it gave his point of view which was as true and strange as.
The journalist wrote: “A revolution style of dress can be say at this moment? A radical change of style which remains provocative and original! “
It was true that this new style went contrary to the usual style. But, this adventure became popular because the word of mouth was very present at the bar or in the street for example.
After this, the radio and the television participated in broadcasting of this new idea of style!
So this man was at the origin of the launching of a new style. But he didn’t know that this new style became popular because he was during a few days in the hospital. Indeed, when I walked on the street to the Sciences Eco building, I crossed more and more people which carried the same clothes. I really thought at this moment of a beginning of a new fashion!
And I had not wrong! Three days later, the style had been adopted by many people in Clermont-Ferrand. And the first man who carried this new style was for them: “The creator of a new world!”
Thus, when the creator leaved the hospital, I came to meet him a second once but in front of the hospital a lot of people were here! I was very surprised! You couldn’t do an idea of this scene! A lot of people was carried same at this creator! I could see red, purple, pink boxer short or leggings! This was inconceivable but real! When the creator left the hospital, I heard a lot of cry and I could see the creator with his yellow and tee-shirt yellow boxer short. He felt like emotional of this welcome. He was very surprised to be at the origin of a dress style revolution, so he shouted:”After the tecktonik, here the vestitonik!”
Since his day, the vestitonik circulated in all France!