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I need help can you help me please?
Est ce que vous pourriez me dire si ceci est bien; et si ça répond au sujet?
sujet: After the 2004 tidal lave in Asia, many children became orphans. In such a situation,do you think it is better for them to be taken charge of in different parts of the world?
After the 2004 tidal lave in Asia, many children became orphans. In such a situation, I think it is the better for them to be taken charge of in differents parts of the world.
Nevertheless, I think that the fact of leaving their country is not either a good solution.
Indeed, I think that to leave their country for a rich country where the adoptions are springs of problems; such as in France.
Can be a "luck" because they have no future in their country of origin.
Furthermore, the adopted children are wished; and thus they will miss nothing.
Contrary in Thailand where they miss means; where the poverty is a queen, and where they will miss maybe love and tenderness because they meet themselves orphans.
The fact of leaving, can be to facilitate their mourning; because this country is the country of all their misfortunes.
The country of their birth becomes suddenly the country of their death.
And to finish, the adoption of these children their would allow ^de to find certain balance; and to solve many present problems of adoption in France.
What would allow to avoid making as the arc of zoé in the LIBAN.
More need "to steal" children.
The happiness of some would make the happiness of the others.
However, that stays their country of all their previous history.
The spring of their culture; of their roots.
By leaving it, they will lose in some sorts their culture.
They will feel as emptied of any essences; and in perpetual collection of their identity.
Furthermore, even if they have no more their relatives; that stays all the same their country; where is the memories of their parents.