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Je pensais avoir TOUT corrigé

Maintenant j'ai tout corrigé sauf quelques petites fautes que je ne sais corriger!!

1/Taylor is a woman who adopted TURTLE; a cherokee child.
Annawake is an attorney
She works in an office that does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation.
TURTLE is a Cherokee
She was adopted by TAYLOR.
2/The scene takes place

3/The underlined word “I” refers to…

*We have dumped Turtle a Cherokee child; TURTLE.
But some years later, a lawyer named Annawake, ____ who does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation ; comes to inform Taylor that in the eyes of the law.
She is guilty of having “stolen” this child, because the tribe did not give its approval.
Furthermore, the adoption papers are not valid.
*Discussion between these two women about Turtle.
Annawake  explains the law to Taylor.

4/ Annawake manages to win Taylor’s confidence by taking time to explain to her the laws  Politely  ; and by taking time to explain  _to_________  her who she was.
5/ The lines which account for Annawake’s actual presence are:…….
•    The effects that there had on Taylor are:
•    Taylor is irritated; she is afraid that we stole her child.
•    She is fed up
•    She is afraided___ thus she pays attention in what she says
7/ The arguments each character uses to defend their points of view are:…….

12/Annawake has professional arguments .
Whereas Taylor has personal arguments.
Annawake is with Cherokee.
She defends their rights.
Indeed, she does a lot of work for the Cherokee nation.
*While Taylor blames the tribe.
Indeed, Taylor blames the tribe for having mistreated TURTLE; and to have abandoned her.

14/At the first, Taylor is on the defensive because she is afraid that we ___take her Turtle.
But later she does not pay any more attention in the lawyer
Taylor thinks to have
she is determined to show that she is right
And to finish, she is confident because she knows that there is also a constitution for her; and that there is not only Cherokee who can be forbidden.

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Les   ___________  indiquent un vide à remplir (ponctuation, préposition, etc.).

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J'espere que c'est mieux comme ceci; mais j'ai l'impression que plus je corrige, et plus je fais des fautes.

1/Taylor is a woman who adopted TURTLE; a cherokee child.
Annawake is an attorney
She works in an office that does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation.
TURTLE is a Cherokee
She was adopted by TAYLOR.
2/The scene takes place

3/The underlined word “I” refers to…

*We have dumped Turtle a Cherokee child; TURTLE.
But some years later, a lawyer named Annawake; who does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation ; comes to inform Taylor that in the eyes of the law.
She is guilty of having “stolen” this child, because the tribe did not give its approval.
Furthermore, the adoption papers are not valid.
*Discussion between these two women about Turtle.
Annawake  explains the law to Taylor.

4/ Annawake manages to win Taylor’s confidence by taking time to explain to her the laws  Politely  ; and by taking time to explain to her who she was.
5/ The lines which account for Annawake’s actual presence are:…….
•    The effects that there had on Taylor are:
•    Taylor is irritated; she is afraid that we stole her child.
•    She is fed up
•    She is afraided thus she pays attention in what she says
7/ The arguments each character uses to defend their points of view are:…….

12/Annawake has professional arguments .
Whereas Taylor has personal arguments.
Annawake is with Cherokee.
She defends their rights.
Indeed, she does a lot of work for the Cherokee nation.
*While Taylor blames the tribe.
Indeed, Taylor blames the tribe for having mistreated TURTLE; and to have abandoned her.

14/At the first, Taylor is on the defensive because she is afraid that we will take her Turtle.
But later she does not pay any more attention in the lawyer
Taylor thinks to have
she is determined to show that she is right
And to finish, she is confident because she knows that there is also a constitution for her; and that there is not only Cherokee who can be forbidden.

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naïanadalana a écrit :

J'espere que c'est mieux comme ceci; mais j'ai l'impression que plus je corrige, et plus je fais des fautes.

Ce n'est qu'une impression. Il faut se demander ce qui pourrait être à corriger:
conjuguaison
temps
accord
faux ami
ponctuation (quelle est la fonction du point-virgule?)
syntaxe
besoin ou non d'un article
........

*We have dumped Turtle a Cherokee child ; TURTLE.
But some years later, a lawyer named Annawake ; who does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation ; comes to inform Taylor that in the eyes of the law .
**Discussion between these two women about Turtle.
Annawake  explains the law to Taylor.

4/ Annawake manages to win Taylor’s confidence by taking time to explain to her the laws  Politely  ; and by taking time to explain to her who she was.
5/ The lines which account for Annawake’s actual presence are:…….
•    The effects that there had on Taylor are:
•    Taylor is irritated; she is afraid that we stole her child.
•    She is fed up
•    She is afraided  __ thus she pays attention in what she says
*While Taylor blames the tribe.
Indeed, Taylor blames the tribe for having mistreated TURTLE; (and) to have abandoned her.

14/At the first, Taylor is on the defensive because she is afraid that we will take her Turtle.
But later she does not pay any more attention in the lawyer
*Taylor thinks to have
she is determined to show that she is right
And to finish, she is confident because she knows that there is also a constitution for her; (and) that there is not only Cherokee who can be forbidden.

Bon courage.

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Merci

Toutefois, je ne comprend pas qu'est ce que signifie les étoiles rouges?

Et ce qui est en gras; je n'arrive vraiment pasà corriger, sauf en rajoutant une erreure.

*We have dumped Turtle a Cherokee child.
But some years later, a lawyer named Annawake ; who does a lot of work for the Cherokee Nation ; comes to inform Taylor that in the eyes of the law .
**Discussion between these two women about Turtle.
Annawake  explains the law to Taylor.

4/ Annawake manages to win Taylor’s confidence by taking time to explain to her the laws  Politely  ; and by taking time to explain to her who she was.
5/ The lines which account for Annawake’s actual presence are:…….
    The effects that there had on Taylor are:
•    Taylor is irritated; she is afraid that we stole her child.
•    She is fed up
•    She is afraided  __ thus she pays attention in what she says
*While Taylor blames the tribe.
Indeed, Taylor blames the tribe for having mistreated TURTLE; to have abandoned her.
14/At first, Taylor is on the defensive because she is afraid that we will take her Turtle.
But later she does not pay any more attention in the lawyer
*Taylor thinks to have ...................
she is determined to show that she is right
And to finish, she is confident because she knows that there is also a constitution for her; that there is not only Cherokee who can be forbidden.

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* Ceci n'est pas une phrase, syntactiquement parlant.
(Mon msg #20).

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Et pour ce qui est en gras?

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Il faut se demander ce qui pourrait être à corriger:
conjuguaison
temps
accord
faux ami
ponctuation (quelle est la fonction du point-virgule?)
syntaxe
besoin ou non d'un article

msg #24!

Maintenant laissons ton prof faire son travail de correction.

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Merci

Expression écrite d'anglais

Marianne, la prochaine fois ne venez pas en invité sous des pseudos divers, on sait que c'est vous.