Demande de correction d’une expression écrite en anglais
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger mon expression écrite de mon DS d'anglais. Cette expression écrite avait pour sujet: "In your opinion, is the death penalty a good punishment for criminals ?".
I think the death penalty is a good or bad punishment for criminals.
First of all, criminals, wo dead people, muss dead normaly. But I think in the tweenty-one century, they (gouvernement) can give a second luck. Because all the world can have a second luck! And if they begin, they have a bad punishment.
Secondly, people, wo have lost a very important person in their life, can pardon the criminal. I know that is more difficult but it help their in their life.
Thirdly, at this moment, a lots of people dead by the terrorist: they are also a very big criminal. This person muss have good punishment because it's very terrible and horrible to dead a hundred people for their gloire. So the dealth penalty is a good punishment for the terrorists.
To sum up, the dealth penalty depends on the situation. But I think the criminals muss good punishment but not he dealth penalty.