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Correction d'une expression écrite en anglais - Journal intime

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21.12.2012

Dear diary,
To start with, I think that I completely failed my biology questionnaire, that I know that I would have more studied for my father is not going to be happy on this matter.
On the other hand I think that most of my companion completely succeeded my biology questionnaire especially Jean who studied throughout the week.
Any way I shall have time to catch up my questionnaire and to save my orientation!

22.12.2012
Expensive newspaper
Today we plan our stay in Norway for the winter holidays my parents(relatives) want to take Pinky our dog but our airline company forbids pets I think that our stay will be cancel because of Pinky!
At the high school I met my former(old) professor of math who be in my previous good middle school(college) of the year for today here we are!

23.12.2012
Expensive newspaper
Today nothing special I am going to tell you my day:
Today at 6.00 am ' also got up. Breakfast in the morning is not much appetite Because it did not doh. At 7.30 I went to school. Was funny and enjoyable lessons. I be on drugs home at 4.15. Too tired to eat and slept. Was 7 o' clock when I get up. I watched has little news. After-party the reading I went to my room for more work. I slept at 11 o' clock. Spent has good bun …

24.12.2012
Today adds us path in the park we cycled and of the roller it was very funny I think that one will return another day, by going back(entering my) home I perceived that I had homework I took a little bit ready a 1 hour(am) + 20 time to revise my English lesson in 25.12.2012
Today I have just learnt that I pass in the sector(network) which I chose I think that I can realize my dream of going to Faculty of Medicine

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Correction d'une expression écrite en anglais - Journal intime

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21.12.2012

Dear diary,
To start with, I think that I completely failed my biology test, that I know that I would have studied more for my father is not going to be happy about that.
On the other hand I think that most of my companions completely succeeded the biology test, especially Jean who studied all week.
Anyway I shall have time to catch up with my exam and save my orientation!

22.12.2012
Dear diary
Today we planned our stay in Norway for the winter holidays my parents (relatives) want to take Pinky our dog but our airline company does not allow pets I think that our stay will be cancel because of Pinky!
In highschool I met my former math teacher who was in my previous good middle school (college) of the year.
That's all for today !

23.12.2012
Dear diary
Today nothing special. I am going to tell you about my day:
Today  am I got up at 6.00 am. Breakfast in the morning, I did not have much appetite Because it did not doh. At 7.30am I went to school. Was funny and enjoyable lessons. I be on drugs home at 4.15 pm. Too tired to eat and slept.  I got up at 7 pm. I watched some news. After party the reading I went to my room for more work. I went to sleep at 11 pm. Spent has good bun …

24.12.2012
Today adds us path in the park we cycled and of the roller it was very funny I think that one will return another day, when I came back home I realised that I had homework to do, I took a little bit ready a 1 hour(am) + 20 times to revise my English lesson in
25.12.2012
Today I have just learnt that I passed in the field I chose, I think that I can achieve my dream of going to Faculty of Medicine.