Anglais - Correction d'une expression écrite
Bonjour à tous , voila , j'ai une expression ecrite a rendre et ayant des difficultées en anglais j'aimerais avoir une correction de cette expression pour pouvoir retravailler dessus et comprendre mes fautes. Pouvez vous m'aider s'il vus plait , merci d'avance
On July , 8th , 1982 , an intruder managed to get into Buckingham palace and into the Queen's bedroom. When the Queen saw him ,she was surprised , she had a little cry of fear.Someone knocks at the door and asks with a masculine voice " everything is well Your Majesty ? ", she replies " yes , don't worry". She examines the foreigner and utters three words " who are you ? ". The man begs " Your Majesty Please , don't tell that I am here , I must tell you something ". The Queen asks that she must call the security .The intruder gets up abruptly, and implores the Queen " I want just said that I am here because , I have a problem with my wife , she doesn't want speak with me , I want that you send a letter where you ask to come here , in Buckingahm . She likes you , she can't refuse. I will be here to speak with her , she will can't flee , she will must speak with me . Please Your Majesty , send a letter ". The queen is very suprised about his request , finally , she answers " Sir , I have duties and I have not the time for that but If I have a little time , I will send this letter , give me the Name of your Wife ". With a smile the intruder pronounces the name " Katte Middleton". The Queen is shocked ,she understands that this man is crazy, she calls the security ,. She heard the last words of the intruder " Kate Middleton is my wife, I love she , she loves me ..."