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Dialogue en anglais - Deux personnes se disputent

Bonjour !

Je dois rendre un dialogue en Anglais, le sujet est le suivant : " Vous devez mettre en scène un enfant/adolescent et une personne supérieure hiérarchiquement, qui se disputent à propos du sujet de votre choix. "

Voici donc mon dialogue :

A mother and her daughter are in the kitchen and are disputing on the subject of a party where the girl wants to go.
But the problem is that the mother refuses to let her daughter go there without her permission:

Mother (speaking drily): You are not going out without my permission, are you?

Daughter: (Drank mum) : I really need to go to this party, and I am asking for your permission ... please.

Mother: I do not want you to go to this party

Daughter: Why?

Mother: Because I think that you are going to do like the last time, you will drink too much alcohol and you are going to get drunk, I do not want that to arrive to you Daughter: Please mum, I really want to go to this party/dance, I promess i won't get drunk.

Mother (arms on the hips): No!

Daughter (grate the head): Mum I don't want to be like you when you were younger.

Mother (in reflection): ... I... agree... but just 2 hours, I will come to pick you up...

Daughter (change in the arms of her mother): thank you my beautiful mum, I love you!


Je ne suis pas une lumière en Anglais, mais j'ai vraiment fais de mon mieux ! Qql pourrait-il m'indiquer mes erreurs ( si erreurs il y a ) et me les corriger, tout en m'expliquant !

Merci d'avance.
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