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#1 01/05/2008 17:41
Aide pour mon essai d'anglais
Bonjour j'aimerai avoir de l'aide pour me dire les fautes de mon essai , merci
Subject : « Good men must not obey the laws too well » do you agree with this quotente?
« Good men must not obey the laws too well » is prononced by Ralph Waldo Emerson in 1844, which is extract in second essay, politics. This sentence means that the laws were made to give everybody their rights, but without causing harm to anyone. Is it really a good man who always obeys the laws?
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There is in State, any country, laws that are created to be respected. In country, if you don't respected the laws you stand trail ( passer en justice ).These People who don't respected the laws are jugded in fonction to their offence ( infraction ), they will deliberate if this persone is good or not. Exemple, prisoners are considered as bad men, because they wrong somebody (causer du tord). Moreover, The justice is here to balance between the population, otherwise ( sinon ) there would be total arnarchy. None people obey the laws ,and everybody as would want ! Exemple , in « lycée de villaroy » , pupils blockade educational establishment so they skiped lessons
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A man has the right to assert rights ( faire valoir ses droits), for it he used severals ways to achieve one's ends whose ( dont ) « not obey the laws ». Following in the footseps of ( a exemple de ) Martin luther king, who is a man who used to by any means possible to struggle civic right for black 's people. In spite of that, Martin Luther King didn't obey the laws to get to hear
Now he considered like a good man. What's more , if people don't obey the laws like Martin luther for a good cause, you can say that they are a good men
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To conclude, a good man is a persone who don't hurt somebody. The laws are created to respected but a good man is here to show her anger ( montrer sa colère ) but without to hurt somebody ( faire du mal ). For a good man is a persone who fights for a good cause , for struggles against the discrimination ( for instance) . So a Good man must not obey the laws too well , but there are men who overstep the bounds of the laws ( abuser de ) .
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est ce que le chois de ma problé tique est trs judicieuse ?
ps : ne faire pas attention au nombre
merci
#2 01/05/2008 17:52
Aide pour mon essai d'anglais
amelieee a écrit :
Subject : « Good men must not obey the laws too well » do you agree with this quotente?
« Good men must not obey the laws too well » is prononced by Ralph Waldo Emerson in 1844, which is extract in second essay, politics. This sentence means that the laws were made to give everybody their rights, but without causing harm to anyone. ________Is it really a good man who always obeys the laws?
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There is in State, any country, laws that are created to be respected. In ____ country, if you don't respected the laws you stand trail .These People who don't respected the laws are jugded in fonction to their offence , they will deliberate if this persone is good or not. Exemple, prisoners are considered as bad men, because they _____ wrong somebody . Moreover, justice is here to balance between the population, otherwise there would be total arnarchy. None people obey the laws ,and everybody as would want ! Exemple , in « lycée de villaroy » , pupils blockade educational establishment so they ______ skiped lessons
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A man has the right to assert rights ( faire valoir ses droits), for it he used severals ways to achieve one's ends whose ( dont ) « not obey the laws ». Following in the footseps of Martin luther king, who is a man who used to by any means possible to struggle civic right for black 's people. In spite of that, Martin Luther King didn't obey the laws to get to hear Now he ______ considered like a good man. What's more , if people don't obey the laws like Martin luther for a good cause, you can say that they are a good men
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To conclude, a good man is a persone who don't hurt somebody. The laws are created to respected but a good man is here to show her anger but without to hurt somebody . For a good man is a persone who fights for a good cause , for struggles against discrimination ( for instance) . So a Good man must not obey the laws too well , but there are men who overstep the bounds of the laws .
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Il serait mieux d'essayer d'écrire des phrases en aglais tout de go, plutôt que de traduire tes idées en français.
La moralité moderne veut que l'on accepte les normes de son époque. Qu'un homme cultivé puisse les accepter me semble le pire des immoralités. (O. Wilde)
