Spears a écrit :

Bonjour á tous.
Voici un petit texte d'anglais que j'ai écris en français et a présent je voudrais de l'aide pour le traduir s'il vous plait.
Voici mon texte:

Raina: En attendant allons manger!
Man: Je crains que la patrouille ne soit de retour et qu'il ne me découvre. Dit-il hésitant.
Raina: Á présent ils sont partis, ils reviendront probablement quand il fera jour.
Finalement, le capitaine Bluntschli finit par assentir, puis tout deux descendirent manger un succulent repas.
Les deux jours qui suivirent furent paisibles, personne ne vînt rechercher le capitaine.
Raina et lui passèrent de longues heures a marcher dans les rues et á parler.
Cependant, ils entendirent bientôt dire qu'une patrouille viendrait bientôt au village pour rechercher un mercenaire disparu, afin de juger celui-ci disaient-ils.
Ce fut l'heure pour Raina et Bluntschli de se séparer, il partit aussitôt afin d'avoir de l'avance sur ses ennemis.
Quatre mois passèrent, puis cinq sans que Raina n'ai de nouvelles de lui. Et les mois continuèrent á passer.
Lorsqu'un jour,près de trois ans plus tard, alors que la jeune femme se trouvait de passage en France, elle rencontra un homme dont la phisionomie lui était familière, elle lui mit la main sur l'épaule et dit:
Raina: Excusez-moi, je...
L'homme se retourna brusquement, il la reconnut aussitôt et tous deux se jettèrent dans les bras l'un de l'autre.

Et voici ma traduction approximative.

Raina: We should go and eat!
Man: I'm afraid that the patrol would be back and discovers me. (he said hesitantly).
Raina:For now they are gone. They will surely return when the day comes.
Finally, captain Bluntschli agrees, and they go down to eat a delicious dinner.
The two days that followed were peaceful, and nobody came searching for the Captain Bluntschli.
Raina and him, passed long hours walking down the street and talking about everything.
However, one day, they heard that a patrol will soon comes searching a lost mercenary to get judging.
It was time for Raina and Bluntschli to get seperated, he leaves immediately.Raina propose him to go with him but he doesn't want ______.
Four months go by, then five, and Raina still did not have heard any news about him, and the time still goes by.
When a day, nearly three years later, while Raina was in France, she saw a man whose phisionomie was familiar for her.
She put her hand on the man's shoulders and said:
Raina: excuse me, you...
The man turn round suddenly, he recognize her immediately.
They were so happy to [u]met each other![/u]Raina ask him about what happen in these three years that followed their meeting.
Man: Well, in the two first months, I try to escape from the patrol, but they soon lost me.



CIAO

Merci beaucoup tu est très sympa.

Bonjour;

je dois écrire une article de presse provenant du SUN.
Le headline que j'ai choisi est: forever in your debt ( l'histoire de départ dont je dois prendre exemple est celle que Victoria beckham a eu une gros diamant pour son anniverssaire par son mari).

Est-ce que mon histoire va bien? Est -elle cohérente avec mon gros titre?

Et pourriez-vous me dire si mon texte convient ( le langage doit être familier).


Merci beaucoup d'avance

A SURPRISING PRESENT!!


Moby would like to marry Britney Spears!


If the singer Moby has no very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him of credit note of the humor!
He has indeed just declared (on the tone of the joke we hope for it) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would like to get married to the singer in the look more and more trash.
Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, on the occasion of a collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of the lolita.
Since, he tells to feel more and more attracted by her, as his escapades make the headlines of magazines people. " Britney is as this tragic character of Tennessee William, the more she becomes big and bizarre, the more I love her! ".

MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
TWO CRAZY

MOBY would have offered a razor of more than £1000000 to Britney Spears.
This razor being encircled with diamond. Britney thus has to envy nothing in Victoria Beckham which had a diamond for its birthday by her husband
Shocking; but so attracting; it will be fill Britney in the slightest details.
Indeed, the singer it being moved closer to the young lady these time this; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she still has some work level shirt.


MOBY LIKES CATS BUT HAS SMALL DOSE.
CAN BE IS IT FOR CA THAT HE OFFERED A RAZOR TO BRTINEY.
BRITNEY BEING IN SEARCH OF A MISTER who will know to tame her.

Je préfère aider ceux qui ont fait leur propre traduction sans l'aide d'un logiciel.

Alors voila je l'ai refait, mais sans traducteur.

Merci de votre aide


Alors voila je l'ai refait; et ce n'est pas d'un traducteur.



Moby would marry Britney Spears! 

If the singer Moby hasn’t a very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him to have humor!

Indeed, Moby has developed an unlikely crush on Britney Spears, the Sun reports.
He has just declared (on the tone of the joke we hope for it) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would marry the singer in the look more and more trash.
Moby, the hip electronica artist said he’d marry Spears “in a heartbeat.”

Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, on the occasion of a collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of the lolita.
Since, he says that he feels more and more attracted by her, as his escapades make the headlines of magazines people. “She’s like this Tennessee Williams tragic figure,” Moby said, according to the Sun. “The fatter she gets, the weirder she gets, the more I love her.
I found her moderately appealing in the late ’90s, but now I would marry her in a heartbeat.”


MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
                  TWO CRAZY


MOBY  would have offered a razor of more than  £1000000 to Britney Spears.
This razor is encircled of diamond.  Britney  hasn’t to envy nothing in Victoria Beckham which had a diamond for its birthday by her husband
Shocking; but so attracting; it will be fill Britney in the slightest details.
Indeed, the singer is more close to the young lady these time this; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she still has some work to the shirt.


MOBY LIKES CATS BUT a little.
May be it is for that, that  he  had OFFERED A RAZOR TO BRTINEY.
BRITNEY is a kind of pets who would like be tame.


Merci

J'espere que vous pourriez m'aider

bpibviu a écrit :

Alors voila je l'ai refait, mais sans traducteur.

Merci de votre aide


Alors voila je l'ai refait; et ce n'est pas d'un traducteur.



Moby would marry Britney Spears! 

If the singer Moby hasn’t a very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him to have humor!

Indeed, Moby has developed an unlikely crush on Britney Spears, the Sun reports.
He has just declared (on the tone of the joke we hope for it) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would marry the singer in the look more and more trash. Moby, the hip electronica artist said he’d marry Spears “in a heartbeat.”

Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, on the occasion of a collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of the lolita.
Since, he says that he feels more and more attracted her, as his escapades make the headlines of magazines people. “She’s like this Tennessee Williams tragic figure,” Moby said, according to the Sun. “The fatter she gets, the weirder she gets, the more I love her.
I found her moderately appealing in the late ’90s, but now I would marry her in a heartbeat.”


MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
                  TWO CRAZY

MOBY  would have offered a razor of more than  £1000000 to Britney Spears.
This razor is encircled of diamond.  Britney  hasn’t to envy nothing in Victoria Beckham which had a diamond for its birthday by her husband
Shocking; but so attracting; it will be fill Britney in the slightest details.
Indeed, the singer is more close to the young lady these time this; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she still has some work to the shirt.


MOBY LIKES CATS BUT a little.
May be it is for that, that  he  had OFFERED A RAZOR TO BRTINEY.
BRITNEY is a kind of pets who would like be tame.


Merci

J'espere que vous pourriez m'aider

Moby wants to marry Britney Spears! 

If the singer Moby hasn’t a very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him to be funny!

Indeed, Moby has developed an unlikely crush on Britney Spears, the Sun reports.
He has just declared (With a tone of joke; we hope) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would marry the singer who has a look which is more and more trash. Moby, the hip electronica artist said he’d marry Spears “in a heartbeat.”

Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, During his collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of Britney Spears.
Since, he says that he feels more and more attracted her, as his escapades make the headlines of magazines people. “She’s like this Tennessee Williams tragic figure,” Moby said, according to the Sun. “The fatter she gets, the weirder she gets, the more I love her.
I found her moderately appealing in the late ’90s, but now I would marry her in a heartbeat.”


MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
                           TWO MAD MEN

MOBY  would have offered a razor of more than  £1000000 to Britney Spears.
This razor has a lot of diamond.  Britney does not need to be jealous of Victoria Beckham; because she had a diamond for her birthday by her husband
Shocking; but so cute; it will Satisfy  Britney in the slightest details.
Indeed, the singer is more close to the young lady At the moment; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she still has a lot of job about her removal of hair of the shirt.

MOBY LIKES CATS BUT a little.
May be it is for that, that  he  had OFFERED A RAZOR TO BRTINEY.
BRITNEY is a kind of pets who would like be tame.

,inhmoibiumbv a écrit :

Moby wants to marry Britney Spears! 

If the singer Moby hasn’t a very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him!

Indeed, Moby has developed an unlikely crush on Britney Spears, the Sun reports.
He has just declared (with his usual sense of humour,we hope) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would marry the singer, who has a look which is more and more trash. Moby, the hip electronica artist said he’d marry Spears “in a heartbeat.”

Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, during his collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of Britney Spears.
Sincethen, he says that he feels more and more attracted her, as her escapades make the headlines of magazines people. “She’s like this Tennessee Williams tragic figure,” Moby said, according to the Sun. “The fatter she gets, the weirder she gets, the more I love her.
I found her moderately appealing in the late ’90s, but now I would marry her in a heartbeat.”


MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
                           TWO MAD MEN

MOBY  would have offered a razor of more than  £1 000 000 to Britney Spears.
This razor has a lot of diamonds.  Britney does not need to be jealous of Victoria Beckham; because she had a diamond for her birthday from her husband
Shocking; but so cute; it will Satisfy  Britney's dearest wish.
Indeed, the singer is closer to the young lady at the moment; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she still has a lot of job about her removal of hair of the shirt.
MOBY LIKES CATS BUT a little.
Maybe it is for that, that  he  had OFFERED A RAZOR TO BRTINEY.
BRITNEY is a kind of pet who would like be tame.

Moby wants to marry Britney Spears! 

If the singer Moby hasn’t a very good taste in girls, we cannot blame him!

Indeed, Moby has developed an unlikely crush on Britney Spears, the Sun reports.
He has just declared (with his usual sense of humour,we hope) to the magazine « The Sun » that he would marry the singer, who has a look which is more and more trash. Moby, the hip electronica artist said he’d marry Spears “in a heartbeat.”

Moby had met Britney Spears in 2003, during his collaboration on the album « In the Zone » of Britney Spears.
Sincethen, he says that he feels more and more attracted her, as her escapades make the headlines of magazines people. “She’s like this Tennessee Williams tragic figure,” Moby said, according to the Sun. “The fatter she gets, the weirder she gets, the more I love her.
I found her moderately appealing in the late ’90s, but now I would marry her in a heartbeat.”


MOBY-BRITNEY = TWO SHAVED SKULLS
                           TWO MAD MEN

MOBY  would have offered a razor of more than  £1 000 000 to Britney Spears.
This razor has a lot of diamonds.  Britney does not need to be jealous of Victoria Beckham; because she had a diamond for her birthday from her husband
Shocking; but so cute; it will Satisfy  Britney's dearest wish.
Indeed, the singer is closer to the young lady at the moment; he was able to see that in spite of the shaved skull; she hasn't  a  good removal of hair to the level of the "maillot"== je n'arrive pas à trouver l'équivalent en Anglais :s.
MOBY LIKES CATS BUT  in small quantity.
Maybe it is for that, that  he  had OFFERED A RAZOR TO her britney).
BRITNEY is a kind of pet who would like be tame.


En tout cac merci beaucoup pour votre aide